Note: there are extracted by Andy and Marcel on a commented Draft by Paul
Vertex
1) pp22-23 there is a discrepancy of 50-100 vs. 80-100 in duty factor
2) Table 2.2.1 Paul would like to see lengths for the barrel layers
and suggests a plot of Si layers hit vs. theta
3) Paul suggests combining Figs 2.1.1 and 2.2.1
4) 2.3.3 last paragraph - we need to clarify nomenclature "barrel", "F-B",
"large z",...
5) Section 2.4.3 - can we give delta(T) over the cycle of beam on/off?
Tracker
1) Does Fig 3.3.1 add anything beyond Fig 3.2.1 ?
2) 3.3.1 first paragraph - is it necessary to expose this dirty laundry?
3) 3.4 What is "pile-up" in the context of single bunch time stamping?
(g-g overlay + mu + n ?) "pile-up" will confuse PP people!
4) Fig 3.4.1 right - odd behavior at 40 deg - origin?
5) 3.4.1 What is the impact from inefficiency of high Pt, low theta
tracks on PFA?
6) 3.4.2 also here - what is effect on PFA?